Wednesday, 1 July 2009

Slow motion

This should have been posted by now.


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  2. Comment on the best bits: Ben climbing out of a cardboard box should have been in a comedy: Antony nicking the package at the end works well. Some of the soundtrack has a bizarre and interesting effect

    Things you can improve: No giggling. Get your faces straight. Organise your storyboard and use it. Edit on time. Hand the work in on time. The quality of your work needs to be improved radically.

    Marks are out of 3 for this:
    0 means you haven't done it.
    1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
    2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
    3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.

    Medium Shot MS 2
    Long Shot LS 2
    Close Up CU 2
    XLS - extreme long shot 0
    XCU - extreme close up 0
    Pan 2
    Tilt 2
    Zoom 2
    Cross focus 0
    Deep focus 0
    Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 2
    Point of View - POV 3
    Use of tripod 3

    Shot - reverse shot 2 (helped very much by your teacher)
    Establishing shot 2
    Cut 2
    Dissolve 0

    Total out of 54 = 26

    Percentage 48% Grade E, nearly a D