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Comment on the best bits: Ben climbing out of a cardboard box should have been in a comedy: Antony nicking the package at the end works well. Some of the soundtrack has a bizarre and interesting effectThings you can improve: No giggling. Get your faces straight. Organise your storyboard and use it. Edit on time. Hand the work in on time. The quality of your work needs to be improved radically.Marks are out of 3 for this:0 means you haven't done it.1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.CAMERAMedium Shot MS 2Long Shot LS 2Close Up CU 2XLS - extreme long shot 0XCU - extreme close up 0Pan 2Tilt 2Zoom 2Cross focus 0Deep focus 0Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 2Point of View - POV 3Use of tripod 3EDITShot - reverse shot 2 (helped very much by your teacher)Establishing shot 2Cut 2Dissolve 0Total out of 54 = 26Percentage 48% Grade E, nearly a D